
As a lapsed blogger, I’m hoping that the A-Z Challenge (26 blog posts over one month with Sundays off for good behaviour) will be the kick up the backside I need to get me blogging again. It’ll either rekindle my love of blogging or you’ll never hear from me again 😉
Unfortunately, I wasn’t quite organised enough to have a blog post ready for A, so I’ve cheated slightly (mmm, day one and I’m cheating already, that’s not a good start…) and changed the protagonist’s name from June to April in this story I wrote for the Reader’s Digest 100 Word Competition. Which I didn’t win (bastards, what’d they know??) but I still really like the concept.
This story isn’t like me at all as I mainly go for comedy, Young Adult or mystery stories, but it’s fun to play around with different genres when the stories are this short!
April Skies
‘Sorry I haven’t done your hair lately, Mum,’ said April, combing the silvery curls. ‘The salon’s so busy and what with the new extension and the kids’ activities, there aren’t enough hours in the day.’
April sighed: she had no excuses really.
‘I’ll do this front bit with the hot brush; I know you hate it sticking up.’ April brushed Mum’s hair until it shone like a halo. ‘There, all done.’
Dad came to the bedroom door. ‘It’s time to go.’
‘She looks beautiful, doesn’t she?’ said April, planting a gentle kiss on Mum’s cheek. ‘Tell the undertaker she’s ready.’
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Ah, its very sweet. I’ve never managed a story that short. You should’ve won.
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Can you get on the judging panel for next year please????
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Pleased to see you are blogging again. I so enjoy your style. I look forward to the amusing treats to come
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Ooooh, I feel under pressure now!
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I didn’t see that ending coming. Nicely done and a bit poignant.
It’s great to see you back – you have been missed!
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Aw, thanks Elaine! Even though I’ve been away, I’ve still been reading your posts…but on my phone which doesn’t allow me to comment for some reason. But I’m still keeping up with you!
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How odd that your phone doesn’t allow you to comment – perhaps it is a member of some comment-police group. 🙂
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I need to stop looking at my phone so much and get back to my desk!
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Obviously being in Rome puts lead in your pencil!
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Not sure you know the correct meaning of that expression…
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I would say you are off to an amazing start. It’s a very touching story.
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Aw, thanks very much! Still a long way to go…
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I know!! Only day 2 and already I’m questioning my sanity 😉
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Plus all the new blogs you need to check out…I shall also do a quick sanity check!
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Welcome to the challenge! It’s a great story and I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it!
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Thanks for the kind words 🙂
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Keep it coming, Barb! …. I need to crank up activity again, maybe we can egg each other on 😉
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Great idea! Not sure if I’m going to manage 26 posts but at least it’s got me back on the blog (that actually sounds a bit unpleasant!!)
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I really hope you do not kick blogging altogether. You’ve such talent and brilliant writing skills. 🙂
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Aw, how kind! I’m blushing now 😉
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